What does your character want? This is an important question to answer because it determines what your protagonist hopes to achieve by the story’s end. If the goal, or outer motivation, is written well, readers will identify fairly quickly what the overall story goal’s going to be and they’ll know what to root for. But how do you know what outer motivation to choose?
If you read enough books, you’ll see the same goals being used for different characters in new scenarios. Through this thesaurus, we’d like to explore these common outer motivations so you can see your options and what those goals might look like on a deeper level.
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Character’s Goal (Outer Motivation): Realizing a dream one was never able to achieve
Forms This Might Take:
Pursuing a new career
Getting a degree/going back to school
Being creative in a way one was never able to fully be before
Living in one’s dream setting
Traveling the world
Inventing something and making it available to the world
Completing a bucket list
Achieving a sports-related conquest (running a marathon, climbing a mountain, sailing around the world, winning an Olympic medal, etc.)
Running for office
Pursuing spiritual enlightenment (giving up material possessions, becoming a missionary or monk, going on a pilgrimage, etc.)
Having a child when one was never able to do so before
Making life better for an underprivileged or underrepresented people
Being the first (of one’s race, gender, family, ethnicity, etc.) to accomplish something
Human Need Driving the Goal (Inner Motivation): self-actualization
How the Character May Prepare for This Goal:
Making a list of steps needed to achieve the goal
Putting together a team of experts to help in various areas
Physically preparing one’s body for the task ahead
Getting in the right mental mindset
Honing the skills necessary to succeed (taking a class, hiring a coach, participating in an internship, etc.)
Studying those who have succeeded in the past
Budgeting one’s finances to allow for expenses
Purchasing necessary materials
Making contacts that can help one along the journey
Joining groups, clubs, organizations, etc. where people share the same passion
Purging the naysayers from one’s life, or cutting them out of the process
Coming up with a mantra or a visual image to focus on
Giving up habits that are counterproductive to one’s success
Taking on extra work or jobs to pay for expenses
Getting rid of distractions (relationships, hobbies, etc.)
Re-prioritizing one’s life around the new goal
Making difficult sacrifices if it increases one’s chances of success (sacrificing sleep, one’s physical health, friendships, pastimes that make one happy, etc.)
Possible Sacrifices or Costs Associated With This Goal:
Losing friends and family members who don’t understand one’s drive to achieve this particular goal
Losing important relationships due to one’s obsession with achieving the goal
Giving up beloved pastimes and hobbies that one no longer has time for
Risking failure
One’s sense of value or worth being tied to reaching the goal, and losing that if the goal isn’t achieved
Bankrupting oneself or one’s family in order to succeed
Making enemies and jealous rivals who will try to sabotage one’s efforts
Sacrificing one’s health due to one’s singleminded focus on the goal
Other basic needs that are sacrificed in the process (e.g., achieving self-fulfillment but giving up love and belonging in the process)
Roadblocks Which Could Prevent This Goal from Being Achieved:
Jealous rivals and competitors
Physical limitations (e.g., wanting to make a pro-basketball team but being considered too short)
Sickness and injuries
Running out of money
Family members and friends who don’t understand why the goal is so important
Mental limitations (a learning disability, mental illness, etc.)
A character flaw that makes success difficult (laziness that causes one to cut corners, a weak-willed nature that undermines one’s discipline, self-doubt, etc.)
A missing piece of information that brings progress to a halt (a law one unknowingly breaks, misfiling a necessary piece of paperwork, etc.)
Conflicting desires (e.g., wanting to achieve this all-consuming goal but also wanting to start a family)
Possible Fallout For the Protagonist if This Goal Is Not Met:
Being so obsessed with the goal that one risks a mental breakdown if one fails
Living an unfulfilled life
The lives of others being impacted (if one is unable to bring an important product to the world, if one is seeking to help a certain group of people, etc.)
A fear of failure and taking risks in the future
Always being haunted by “what could’ve been”
Clichés to Avoid:
The obsessed protagonist who sacrifices everything to achieve his dream and realizes that the sacrifices weren’t worth the result
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