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In response to last week’s column, a reader lamented:
It seems that the current generation is striving to become far simpler than any previous generation could possibly aspire to be.
Really?
Does the “current generation” of legal-writing Snoots advocate a simple, direct writing style simply to rebel against previous generations of legal writers and their affinity for ten-dollar words?
Absolutely not. And for proof that a simple, direct writing style isn’t a newfangled idea, we need only consult some well-known 19th- and early-20th-Century writers and Supreme Court justices.
The Asiatic and Attic Literary Traditions
In The Elements of Legal Style, Bryan Garner explains that two distinct Greek and Roman literary traditions have influenced Western prose style.
The Asiatic prose style—also called the “grand style”—is “a florid oratorical style [that] sports elaborate antitheses, complicated syntax, and correspondences in sense and sound.” John Milton, Samuel Johnson, Edmund Burke, and William Faulkner claimed—in varying degrees—the mantle of the Asiatic style.
In contrast to the Asiatic style, is the Attic style. The Oxford Encyclopedia of Rhetoric describes the Attic style as “a plain and unadorned style of composition.” Garner similarly calls the Attic style a ”refined conversation: concise, restrained, shorn of intricacy.”
19th-Century Atticists: Spencer and Thoreau
In 1852, the British writer Hebert Spencer published Philosophy of Style. Spencer’s formalist approach to good writing was grounded in simplicity and directness.
Spencer wrote that the ideal writer “present[s] ideas that they may be apprehended [by the reader] with the least possible mental effort”:
Regarding language as an apparatus of symbols for the conveyance of thought, we may say that . . . the more simple and the better arranged its parts, the greater will be the effect produced. . . . A reader or listener has at each moment but a limited amount of mental power available. . . . Hence, the more time and attention it takes to receive and understand each sentence, the less time and attention can be given to the contained idea; and the less vividly will that idea be conceived.
Across the pond in 1854, two years after Spencer’s Philosophy of Style, the American writer Henry David Thoreau published Walden.
As William Zinsser points out, Walden—which Thoreau took eight years and seven drafts to write—is a model of “plain and orderly” prose. Here’s one passage that derives its beauty from its simplicity:
I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front only the essential facts of life, and see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I had not lived.
20th-Century Atticists
In the early- to mid-20th Century, several well-known American and British writers wrote in or advocated writing in the Attic style:
Oliver Wendell Holmes: Rat Holes and Fluffy Writing
In addition to the contributions to the Attic style by Supreme Court Justice Robert H. Jackson during his 1941-1954 Supreme-Court tenure, the opinions of Justice Oliver Wendell Holmes, Jr. between 1902 and 1932 show how lawyers can effectively use the Attic style in their legal writing.
Justice Holmes was known for his plain, conversational style in an era characterized by legal writing that was anything but. Garner, for example, notes that Holmes’s opinions effectively used “rhetorical devices such as alliteration, metaphor, and periodic sentences to emphasize his points.”
But Justice Holmes’s flowing, sometimes whimsical style wasn’t always embraced by his fellow justices. Garner recounts that former President and Chief Justice William Howard Taft called out Justice Holmes for writing in an opinion that amplifying a statute would “stop rat holes” in it. Holmes’s retort to Taft’s umbrage was to blame the Supreme Court’s dullish opinions on the anachronistic notion that “judicial dignity required solemn fluffy speech, as, when I grew up, everybody wore black frock coats and black cravats.”
Like the contrasting styles of Hemingway and Faulkner, the distinctly Attic style of Holmes’s legal writing differed sharply from the Asiatic style of Justice Benjamin Cardozo, who President Roosevelt appointed to the Supreme Court in 1932, the year of Holmes’s retirement at the age of 90.
If you admire Holmes’s style, you need not pour through law-school casebooks for contemporary examples of it. Holmes’s style continues to find its voice in the witty, sometimes-biting opinions of jurists such as Antonin Scalia, Bruce Selya, Richard Posner, and Alex Kozinski.
Simple, Direct Prose Style Is No Recent Invention
The discussion above, of course, isn’t a comprehensive treatment of the influence of the Attic style on 19th- and 20th-Century British and American literature and law. But what it does do is smash the silly notion that writing simply and directly is a newfangled idea.
Most mortals will never be able to master the complicated Asiatic style of a Cardozo, a Milton, a Burke, a Johnson, or a Faulkner. Indeed, when most lawyers try their unskilled hands at writing in the Asiatic style the result isn’t stylistic perfection—it’s usually dense, obscure gibberish.
The Attic style, though, offers even mediocre legal writers the chance to be persuasive. So lawyers shouldn’t fret if somebody questions why their writing is so simple and direct. The Attic style has a storied history in British and American literature and law. And we shouldn’t be shy about recognizing it by emulating it.
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Simple Legal Writing a Newfangled Idea? Hardly. is a post from the law firm marketing blog, Lawyerist.com
2012-11-14 17:03:14
Source: http://lawyerist.com/simple-legal-writing-a-newfangled-idea-hardly/